I used to think it was fun whenever I could say “that that” in a sentence.
Example:
I knew that that dog would not behave.
I knew that dog would not behave.
Then I realized that I was really just saying “that” more
than needed.
Then I realized I was really just saying “that” more than
needed.
Then I noticed that everyone overuses “that.” Not just in
conversation, but I see it in emails, news articles, and books.
Then I noticed everyone overuses “that.” Not just in
conversation, but I see it in emails, news articles, and books.
Here is what you need to do. Notice when you write a
sentence that includes the word “that.” Then read the sentence with “that”
omitted. Remove all that are possible to remove.
Over a week or so I accumulated the following from a
variety of sources.
If you were to ask someone that knows me they would
probably say that I am a pretty funny person that takes sarcasm to the max.
**If you were to ask someone who knows me they would
probably say I am a pretty funny person who takes sarcasm to the max.**
She could no longer pretend that he wasn’t an idiot.
**She could no longer pretend he wasn't an idiot.**
There isn’t anything that can be done about the viewing
of data.
** leave it! **
We will provide a file, and not a query that you can run.
**We will provide a file and not a query you can run.**
Moving that line is simply a matter of societal and
cultural change, and technological progress.
** leave it! **
Just want all of you to know that I went to my
"likes", of which I had few, and unliked them all so that you will
not see them as advertising in your news feed.
**Just want all of you to know I went to my
"likes", of which I had few, and unliked them all so you will not see
them as advertising in your news feed.**
In that moment she realized that she wasn’t really sorry
at all and she didn’t really wish him well.
** In that moment she realized she wasn’t really sorry at
all and she didn’t really wish him well.**That ought to do it!
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